Lucky 7 and #Writemotivation Rewards

Lucky 7 and #Writemotivation Rewards

I generally try to avoid getting tagged like the plague. But my dear friend Mandie Baxter decided it would be fun to make me suffer with her. So, here I am.

There are rules that go along with this tagging thing, and I’m pretty sure if you’re reading this you’ve already seen them a thousand times, but I’ll include them here anyway.

The rules? Very simple:
1. Go to page 77 of your current MS.
2. Go to line 7.
3. Copy down the next 7 lines/sentences, and post them as they’re written. No cheating.
4. Tag 7 other victims–er, authors. ;P

Now in my eyes? Rules were made to be broken. I won’t be tagging any other victims… And since I have 4 manuscripts to choose from. I’ll pick whichever one I’m in the mood to pick.

Without further ado, I give you Page 77 of TDP-1. 7 lines down, the next 7 lines.

“No. Sai…” Bastian tries to move and sags with lack of energy.

But she refuses to see it, refuses to listen and the volume of her voice rises as she speaks. “Did you do this to me? Save me when I should have died? Gave me a chance when I don’t deserve to live? Gave me hope that I could redeem myself and eventually be free of some of this guilt – all to trick me and make me like them? I won’t do it! I won’t!” Each question punctuates with a violent shake of the room.

“It’s everything I hate. You’re everything I hate!”

I was going to pick a different WIP, but apparently only this one is lively on page 77 ;)

If you’d like to be tagged, consider yourself tagged. If not… don’t :P

Now – onto #Writemotivation rewards.

Please remember – you must have actively participated in the #writemotivation hashtag, achieved your March goals and visited at least some of your fellow #writemotivationers blogs to claim your reward.

If there is a reward you like please contact me so I can cross it off the list and notify the person giving the reward. Remember, you do not have to accept a reward, but these are what people offered as incentive to get that #writemotivation month done!

@kthanna 4 x 10 page detailed critiques :D
 
@I_Am_LadyJai beta read with line by line honest critique of first chapter.
 
@DyadicEchoes 1 x Beta — Limit 1 chapter-ish (is negotiable).  If you want a grammar check, I might be able to con my wife into helping (she used to be an English teacher).
 
@Ann_Cory Beta read first 1-3 chapters
 
@Bendermender88 I’ve offered my services to review or critique a piece up to ten pages (short story or from novel) and still hold by it! :)
 
@Carolinseidenk Beta read of the first 3 chapters of a MS. :)
 
@callmebecks I’ve got a reward down there already, but allow me to specify. I offer a one time beta of five chapters (from anywhere). I also offer a separate reward for query help.
 
@tamlinsey I am really good at critiquing story structure and verisimilitude, particularly in science fiction and fantasy, where the world building is so important (but any work of fiction is a joy for me.) I can offer a critique on someone’s first 50 pages.
 
@kenra_daniels 1x 10pg critique. I’m pretty good at spotting problems with word usage, sentence structure, verb tense, passive verbs, dialog, narrative, character development, POV, logic, and general inconsistencies. I’d be happy to give someone one in-depth critique of 10 consecutive pages from anywhere in their WIP.
 
@Melisse_Aires I would be happy to beta read a complete WIP but the read will have to be after April 15 due to other time constraints. Comfortable with non-BDSM erotic or mainstream romance, and any subgenre, FF and MM okay. Not really familiar with menage romance.
 
@ACollegeWriter I would love to be a beta reader for somebody! If you need someone feel free to contact me :)
 
@ZMWilmot I can definitely manage a couple of critiques – let’s go with 2. :)
 
@brennabraaten I’ll offer a deep critique of a first chapter (or the first 15 pages, whichever is longer).
 
@graygracy i’m quite new here but i can offer to read and critique the post
 
@alessahinlo I can beta read up to the first 3 chapters of your WIP. :D
 
@stateofego 1 X Beta Critique of first 5 Chapters
 
@okauthor I am willing to do one or two illustrations for the winner’s chosen story.  These will be sketched scenes picked by the author.
 
@mohio73 I’ll provide a critique/beta read of a short story up to 4000 words. The genres I feel most comfortable in are science fiction, fantasy and mystery but I’m willing to give anything a read.

That’s it :D

Thank you to everyone who offered a reward. We did have a very generous person sign up on March 22nd. I’ll be contacting them to let them know why they aren’t listed.

I hope everyone is having a great #writemotivation month, even if it means you’re discovering the line between just enough and too much.

On Monday we’ll have our final March posts. Can’t wait to see how everyone is doing. Any questions, ask away :D

 

16 Comments

  1. Angela Brown
    Mar 24, 2012

    That IS a powerful 7 lines. That last line ended with quite the punch. Glad you went along with the tag. I enjoyed reading this. Have a most excellent weekend :-)

    • K.T. Hanna
      Mar 24, 2012

      Thank you, hon :D I was happy with those 7 lines, even though it wasn’t the WIP I was going to choose.
      I’m glad you enjoyed it. Hope your weekend is awesome.

  2. Jocelyn Rish
    Mar 24, 2012

    Oooh, intriguing excerpt! Sounds like BAD STUFF is happening.

    What a generous group the #writemotivation crew is! Bummed I couldn’t participate this time, but hopefully the next.

    • K.T. Hanna
      Mar 24, 2012

      Yeah – just one of those all my trust has been betrayed moments! :D

      Glad you liked it! Also – there’s always next Writemotivation time :D And you’re always welcome for cheering and to be cheered.

  3. Bonnie Rae
    Mar 24, 2012

    I love it!!!!

    • K.T. Hanna
      Mar 24, 2012

      Thank you :D Loved yours too!

  4. Jamie Dement (LadyJai)
    Mar 24, 2012

    I had the experimentation going for bottled #writemotivation and finally made it work. But then when I tried to mail it out we ran into massive headaches. Hazmat was involved, $$$$ in classes, and $$$$ in shipping…all because rubbing alcohol, even just 20ml, was hazmat material. So, I am back to the scientific drawing board trying to find out what liquid floats on oil, when dyed won’t bleed into the oil, and can be safely and cheaply shipped.

    as for your except…<3 but you already knew that!

    and, since I am not nearly on page 77 on either of my WIPs , I will decline! :-)

    • Sarah Pearson
      Mar 24, 2012

      That’s a powerful piece, makes me want to know all about her!

      • K.T. Hanna
        Mar 24, 2012

        Thank you, Sarah :D Sai’ll probably blush ;)

    • K.T. Hanna
      Mar 24, 2012

      I will remind you of this when you are that far HAHAHAHA <3

  5. Rebecca Enzor
    Mar 25, 2012

    I love that selection from your WIP! Very exciting :) And what a fun tag – much better than “tell us 7 things about you” :P

    • K.T. Hanna
      Mar 26, 2012

      Thank you so much hon :D Yeah, it’s a pretty cool tag, unless you’re paranoid about sharing your work (like I usually am hehe)

  6. Ann Cory
    Mar 25, 2012

    Loved the 7 lines :) Woo hoo! Super intriguing and so much emotion going on. Very visceral. What a great list of rewards – my goodness! Love how supportive and helpful everyone is :)

    • K.T. Hanna
      Mar 26, 2012

      Thank you hon :D We’ve really missed you around #Writemotivation <3 Hope you’re ok.

  7. Stephanie Berget
    Mar 31, 2012

    KT, I accomplished my March goals thanks to you. I’d love @Ann_Cory or @kthanna beta reads if they are still available. Thanks for sponsoring this. It really helped me everyday.

    • K.T. Hanna
      Mar 31, 2012

      Take your pick hon. Either or is fine. Depending on how many people claim a reward you might even be able to have both ;)

      And Congrats! So proud!

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